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Re: Vampires and Lycans. A whole new world to the human eye.
It wasn't a waste of time at all! You definitely have potential as a writer. When we criticize you, it means we like your piece. I see a lot of ...
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Re: Drummer, Dragonrider
Hey, Stori! This a lot clearer than your prologue, but parts are still confusing. Why am I so different? The cry rang in Tion's mind. You put all of this ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Well, Hello!
Chopin! I love playing him on piano. Welcome to YWS! Do you like epic poetry? Ancient lyric poetry? *hugs book of Catullus* -Sakura
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Hey!
Hey, Rachel! Nice to meet you! I'm Sakura. ^_^ A few rules you should know: -No chat speak. This is a writers' site -- we tend to frown upon improper ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: High School students: 8. 9, 10 or 12 grade students?
A few facts: 1. The teachers don't care about anything but their paychecks they receive every two weeks. :roll: Don't believe this, Rakun. It depends on the teacher. Monki -- ...
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Re: Hey=]
We also tend to be grammar Nazis. ^_^ Hey, welcome to the loony bin, er- YWS. I'm Sakura. Nice to meet you!
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Hey, I'm Samantha
Hey, Samantha! Nice to meet you. I see you've met Rosey - she's one of our many greeters. My name is in purple because I'm an Instructor. It's out job ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Make it more crooked," *looks bored and plays with his knife* -Bane What would you do if you ran into your worst enemy on the street?
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
*twiddles thumbs*
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Abandoned flower
Heeellllo, Shauni! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ That flower is absolutely gorgeous! Where did you find it? The colors in this are lovely. It's great how ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
10/10, 'cause how can you not rate the Bible highly?
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
I think you look like a slave of David Edgings. And your name is possibly Otto. But I could be wrong. ^_^ *prods Otto* But I'm not?
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Drummer, Dragonrider Prologue.
Hey, Stori! I'm not at all familiar with what this is based off of. To answer your questions (as your grammar is fine): 1. Is the use of bold and ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Vampires and Lycans. A whole new world to the human eye.
Hey, evil_kookies! Nice to meet you! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ There are way too many errors in this to do a line by line, so ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: MLA siting/quoting
Best site ever: Or it might be .org... But all you have to do is put in the information and it will put it into MLA format for you!
Jan 30, 2009
